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Stop the poem tying itself into a bow
The last two lines explain the poem instead of ending it.
Look only at the final third of the poem below. 1. Say whether the ending resolves: does it summarise, moralise, or hand the reader a conclusion they could have reached themselves? 2. Identify the last line that still carries genuine pressure. Everything after it may be the poem explaining itself. 3. Test three cuts: ending at that line, ending one line earlier, ending one line later. Show each and say what changes. 4. Offer two new endings that close the poem's music without closing its meaning. One image-based, one that ends mid-motion. If the current ending is genuinely earned, say so directly and tell me which line earns it. Do not manufacture a problem. Poem:
Making it yours
- Paste your own material where the prompt asks for it. Everything above that line is instruction, not content.
- Delete any rule that does not apply to you. A shorter prompt that fits beats a thorough one that does not.
- If the answer comes back vague, add a line saying what you do not want. Constraints work better than encouragement.
Finishing a poem. Cutting, ending, titling, and the last decisions before you call a draft done.
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