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Same length, more said

A paragraph that is the right size and the wrong density.

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Tighten this paragraph without making it much shorter. Same length, more said: stronger verbs, fewer abstract nouns, one idea per sentence. Show the before and after of the three sentences you changed most, and say what each change does.

Paragraph:

Making it yours

  • Paste your own material where the prompt asks for it. Everything above that line is instruction, not content.
  • Delete any rule that does not apply to you. A shorter prompt that fits beats a thorough one that does not.
  • If the answer comes back vague, add a line saying what you do not want. Constraints work better than encouragement.

Cutting and compressing. Getting a draft shorter, to a word count, or down to a summary that still says everything.

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