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Critique this outreach sequence

A sequence with poor replies, before blaming the list.

Review the outreach sequence below.

For each step: what it asks of the reader, whether it adds anything the previous step did not, and whether a reasonable person would find it useful or irritating. Flag steps that only exist to create another touch.

Then: the weakest step and why, the step most likely to cause an unsubscribe, and whether the sequence is too long for what is being asked. Rewrite the worst step.

Sequence:

Making it yours

  • Paste your own material where the prompt asks for it. Everything above that line is instruction, not content.
  • Delete any rule that does not apply to you. A shorter prompt that fits beats a thorough one that does not.
  • If the answer comes back vague, add a line saying what you do not want. Constraints work better than encouragement.

Outreach and follow-up. Emails, sequences and call prep written from what the record already tells you.

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