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Sound pass on this draft
A late read purely for how the poem behaves in the mouth.
Read this for sound only, ignoring meaning. Tell me the dominant vowel and consonant textures with examples, any accidental rhyme or alliteration that draws attention without earning it, and the lines that are sonically flat. For the flat lines only, offer substitutions that thread the poem's existing sounds through them. Poem:
Making it yours
- Paste your own material where the prompt asks for it. Everything above that line is instruction, not content.
- Delete any rule that does not apply to you. A shorter prompt that fits beats a thorough one that does not.
- If the answer comes back vague, add a line saying what you do not want. Constraints work better than encouragement.
Sound and metre. Rhymes, scansion, and the read-aloud passes that tell you why a line trips in the mouth.
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